Page 152
Jul26
on July 26, 2013
at 1:00 am
The great return of green-haired Morgane ^^
Have a brand new non-lazy panel 2, little fixes here and there, and a way better flowing dialogue. I also introduced a bit of plot derp, but I’m pretty sure nobody will notice, and it’s completely harmless anyway ^^’
From the looks of it, Marianne is in full control of her powers and bends it to her will. She should be learning to further strengthening her power instead of fearing what she controls.
I could not for the life of me find the plot derp
I still think Morgane’s hair looks adorable like that
was the derp Zach suddenly switching which side of her he is on in the panel 2 & 3 or is there a reflection of light source from above them off the water when they are in in a pitch black cave (minus the firelight)
The former. Zach was there in the previous version of the page, and I forgot about it when remaking page 151… Leading to a little teleportation switcharoo here, as I wasn’t going to redraw ALL the panels anyway. Pretty harmless, as I said ^^
The latter is normal, the light source comes from below the surface 🙂
The lightnings in this version of the page are FAR more good, than at the first one! For first time i’ve barely seen the “out”, that Mariane have spotted!
could you increase the transparency of your text bubbles without making it hard to identify who is speaking please because your art style is rare and only a handful of people actually draw like this I am not being ungrateful I’m just saying also I love your comic and please keep updating
:3
Thanks for the kind words ^///^
Straightly more transparent speech bubbles make the text hard to read, but I’m currently trying to find ways around that problem. Experimentation FTW ^^
SQUEE! Morgane just looks so cute in that last panel! I want it in a resolution that I could use as a desktop background, PLEASE?
I also saw the guy asking about transparent-ish bubbles, could you upload pages both with and without bubbles, for people who just want to oggle your oh-so-scrumptious art?
Glad you like it, I actually really like that last panel too ^///^
I’ll see what I can do for that desktop BG. As for the no-speech pages, I’m not sure it would change much, as I usually try to build the panels so the speech bubbles don’t cover anything significant. In this page, for example, they only hide rocks and grey background ^^ But I’ll make sure to upload a speechless version somewhere (probably on my FA page) should the need arises.
As i quickly search through some pages, the host change his eyecolour everytime the graft is in use (to the grafts colour).
Was it artistic freedom, a mistake or is there some other reason, that Marianne´s not concerned by this in the first Panel?
All I can say without spoiling anything is, I didn’t goof up her eye color in the panel you’re mentioning. You’re free to draw your own conclusions 😉